Aaaah, I see.. the full numbers make sense
Strictly legal by RAW, but I'm pretty sure there's a couple of things that are not quite in the spirit.
Specifically under RAW the following things happen:
Pick magic D, this gives you 1 magic and 1 power point.
Drop essence to 0.31, this causes you to lose 6 magic, however the adept section can be interpreted as you not losing the power point. Also in previous editions this would have dropped your magic cap to 0, it's unclear if the fact this is not mentioned in sr6 is an oversight or deliberate
Buy Magic 1 with karma, it's unclear if this actually gives you a power point during character creation...
The stats you posted above are correct, other than the magic score which should be 1 not 2. I would really check this character with your gm before playing though
Or your could drop the magic part completely, and find yourself with some extra attribute points. All you lose is the 2 points of DV from Critical Strike (but you are still hitting as hard as panther xxl)