Slight tweak to make him a bit less specialized defensively & able to be more social.
Attr-A-24
Magic-B-6+4
Skills-C-28/2
Res-D-$50K
Meta-E-Human-1
Bod 3
Agi 5 (7-ish)
Rea 4 (5)
Str 6 (10)
Wil 3
Log 3
Int 5
Cha 3
Edg 3
Mag 6
Itv 9 (10) + 2D
6S-LongArms-Rifles
6S-Sneaking-Urban
6-Etiquette
6-Perception
6-Unarmed Combat
2G-Athletics
Athletes Way
0.25 = Agility Boost-1
0.5 = Combat Sense-1
0.5 = Critical Strike - UAC
2.5 = Improved Strength-4
1.5 = Improved Reflexes
0.0 = Killing Hands
0.5 = Penetrating Strike-2
0.25 = Spirit Claw
Karma-25+25-50
12-Contacts (21)
4-Jack of All Trades
5-Mentor Spirit-Shark
20-Way of the Athlete
8-Bind Chi Focus (Astral Perception)
1-Remaining Karma
So the reduced Bod, Wil, & Edg certainly makes him a bit easier to kill & can't shrug off Drain or Drugs as well.
But, over all I think he's more balanced with those changes.
Extra Karma, a Foci, the ability to take a single skill the minute the game starts, all good things IMHO.