Ares Mart:
Clementine and O'Connor's scene is definitely having the desired effect, you have the attention of EVERYONE within the sound of your raised voices, a growing ring of an audience, and can hear more coming. You don't see any security yet, but a possible fly in the ointment does exist: a civilian, a bigger man who was shopping with his family nearby, moves in to your scene.
"Is this man bothering you uh,...miss?" He is clearly uncomfortable, but seems to want to help Clementine.
Martell Place:
The visit seems to be wrapping up, the peace officer thanks their host, and Martell gives Johnny and Sam his card, a real cardstock card, and hopes they can do some business. Unless the runners change things, they will be returned to the diner.
Diner:
Sammy and Heron have been given a measure of privacy to finally, everyone in the diner has already had a generous amount of time with the star. The young orks are off in another corner, the boy visibly working his commlink and making contacts, the girl enjoying a sundae and waving at Sammy occaisionally.
You also notice that even though the cook has returned to the kitchen, he is also on his commlink, he seems to be urging his partner to hurry over to the diner.