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Lider Goes Out Alone

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Zen Shooter

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Lider Goes Out Alone

« on: <08-29-11/1919:24> »
Attached is a Shadowrun fan fiction story about an ork street samurai who goes on a run in Seattle against a street gang called the Green Corpse Haterz. Feedback is always welcome  :).
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« Reply #1 on: <09-06-11/2028:35> »
Tip of the hat to this one. I enjoyed it - plenty of action and it moves along at a steady clip. Excellent use of quotations too. I'll PM with more thoughts.
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« Reply #2 on: <10-05-11/0746:00> »
"As an ork, Lider thought that humans, who were two-thirds regular size and not very strong at all, should recruit all the help they could get."

Nice  ;D

Good story - like your fiction.

Rasmus
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