Hoi, chummers.
Looking for a little feedback on a pair of pistols I wrote up and wanted to get a little consensus on before I released them into my game. Used a couple modifications from the forum (marked with asterisks) which are linked at the bottom. Really I'm trying to get a feel for item creation and the bits I'm most concerned about are pricing, availability and fluff. If you would be so kind as to leave a little criticism, it'd be appreciated.
As an aside, Vale corp is a homebrewed AA corp I use in my games to allow for player and GM created content.
VC PacifierHeavy Pistol [Base Model: Ruger Super Warhawk]
7P, -2AP, SS, -, 6 (cy), 12R, 4000
Modifications: Caliber Upgrade*, Increased Cylinder, Smartgun System, Safe Target System, Melee Hardening
The latest in the Vale Corp line of self-defense weapons, the Pacifier has already seen it's fair share of action and received well-deserved praise. With it's increased caliber and reinforced materials, it is well suited to taking out enemies both up close and at a distance; a built-in smartgun and safe target system makes it an ideal choice for those looking for a powerful sidearm and law enforcement alike.
VC War CrimeHeavy Pistol [Base Model: Ruger Super Warhawk]
8P, -3AP, SS, 1, 8 (cy), 14F, 1250
Modifications: High-Power Chambering, Troll Weapon**, Smartgun System
What started as a request for a friend eventually turned into a full production line of these deadly revolvers. Created specifically to fit a troll's hand and usage, this revolver will be leaving holes the size of human fists in its wielder's opponents. Understandable, the corporate court and law enforcement have cracked down on the sale and ownership of one of these aptly named weapons.
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http://forums.shadowrun4.com/index.php?topic=6651.msg117468#msg117468**:
http://forums.shadowrun4.com/index.php?topic=6373.msg111849#msg111849