While not bad (though your Body of 1 will get you killed pretty quick I think), I would like to make a few recommendations. One, trying to add magic in is going to be hard. Magic is VERY karma intensive, especially a mystic adept. A mystic adept is good to be a Jack of the magic world, but it will leave you with very little karma to spend on other skills outside of complementary ones. In other areas, you won't be a Jack, you'll just kinda suck.
If you drop the magic, you'll be able to start off with much better base attributes (key for a good Jack), and then drop a fat credstick of nuyen on a top line set of skillwires. With that, you can augment your core skills (that you pay karma and build points for) with a rotating set of programs that will let you step in and accomplish any non-magical skill. You won't have the flexibility with them that someone who learned them the old fashion way does (no Edge), but you'll be able to cover any nitch by simply dialing up the appropriate skill chip (pilot program for a Nissan Hound anyone). Also, don't forget that if you put your skills at priority A, you can get a skill of 2 or 3 in nearly every major skill in the game.
