Page 2 (Contents), half the names under “PEOPLE” are all-caps, half aren’t. Use regular case for Lady Xoc, Lord Gwyn, Maria Arial, The Arcane Three, La Pantera, and Joseph Mnguni.
Page 7, change “made finally made” to just “finally made” (delete the first “made”)
Page 7, change “passengers that still used” to “passengers who still used”
Page 7, change “people too poor” to “people so poor”
Page 7, change “he only thing” to “the only thing”
Page 8, change “pouring” to “poring”
Page 8, change “was broken” to “were broken”
Page 8, change “thirsting for blood of anyone” to “thirsting for the blood of anyone” (insert “the”)
Page 10 (Deck Building), hyphenate “state-of-the-art”
Page 10 (Deck Building), change “The image shown Angelica” to “The image showed Angelica”
Page 12 (Mean Streets), change “Mr. Johnson that” to “Mr. Johnson who”
Page 13 (Triad Connections), change “Fifth-Eight Battle Brigade” to “Fifty-Eighth Battle Brigade”
Page 13 (Triad Connections), hyphenate “next-generation”
Page 13 (Black Market Battles), hyphenate “black-marketeers”
Page 15 (Neon Ascension), delete either “Four months ago” or “a week ago” (can’t be both)
Page 17 (TRU-13), change “a MCT” to “an MCT”
Page 17 (TRU-13), change “is a guarded secret” to “are guarded secrets”
Page 19 (The Rest), change “who’re lurking” to “that are lurking”
Page 19 (Romanov Clan), change “low-ley” to “low-key”
Page 20 (Shifting Pyre), hyphenate “higher-ups” and “full-time”
Page 20 (Shifting Pyre), change “Arrogant High profile” to “Arrogant, high-profile”
Page 20 (Shifting Pyre), change “a ice cold demeanor” to “an ice-cold demeanor”
Page 21 (Shifting Pyre), change “find them yourself” to “find it yourself”
Page 21 (Shifting Pyre), change “when you are you going” to “when are you going” (delete first “you”)
Page 21 (Shifting Pyre), change “Lyan” to “Lyran” (twice)
Page 24 (Aligning the Court), hyphenate “Seelie-related” and “Tarot-related”
Page 24 (Dearest Lady Xoc), change “thus far been able” to “thus far been unable”
Page 24 (Queens of the Court), change “abides by no ill talk” to “abides no ill talk” (delete “by”)
Page 24 (Queens of the Court), change “those that do so” to “those who speak ill”
Page 25 (Queens of the Court), change “in regards to” to “regarding”
Page 27 (Secrets Revealed), change “possession the Fairy Flag” to “possession of the Fairy Flag” (insert “of”)
Page 28 (Perspicacious Lady Xoc), change “have brought” to “has brought”
Page 28 (Perspicacious Lady Xoc), change “as you have predicted” to “as you predicted” (delete “have”)
Page 28 (Factions and the Arcana), change “each faction is” to “each faction has”
Page 32 (Clues), change “on their own” to “on its own”
Page 33 (Wandering Fool), change “has yet to be determined” to “have yet to be determined”
Page 33 (Wandering Fool), change “they can be depicted” to “it can be depicted”
Page 33 (The Copper), change “lore, information” to “lore or information”
Page 35 (Rules for Using the Tarot), change “go home;” to “go home.” (semicolon should be a period)
Page 36, change “in regards to” to “regarding”
Page 38, change “both who operate” to “both operating”
Page 38, change “demonstrate opulence” to “demonstrates opulence”
Page 40, change “neither involved in a mystery or looking to solve one” to “neither involved in a mystery nor looking to solve one”
Page 44, change “or the purposes” to “for the purposes”
Page 44, change “a secrets of traveling” to “the secrets of traveling”
Page 44, change “build up” to “buildup” (one word)
Page 50, change “further” to “farther”
Page 51 (Kaze Adeki), change “he’s lead” to “he’s led”
Page 51 (Kaze Adeki), change “operative” to “operation”
Page 51 (Kaze Adeki), change “belays” to “belies”
Page 54 (Emliy Llanfrechfa), change “showcase” to “showcased”
Page 55 (Armando Salazar), change “centimeters” to “meters”
Page 55 (Fargus Sol), change “Fargus Sol PhD/T” to “Fargus Sol, Th.D.” (Doctor of Thaumaturgy)
Page 55 (Fargus Sol), change “has lead” to “has led”
Page 56 (Fargus Sol), change “all of the sudden” to “all of a sudden”
Page 56 (Fargus Sol), hyphenate “multi-million-nuyen”
Page 56 (Task Force 154), hyphenate “pinch-hitting”
Page 57 (Task Force 154), change “this joke of the task force” to “this joke of a task force”
Page 58 (Lady Xoc), change “of feathered serpents, sacrifices, and of power” to “of feathered serpents, sacrifices, and power” (delete last “of”)
Page 59 (Lord Gwyn), change “those that speak” to “those who speak”
Page 60 (Mara Arial), change “why her face in on a card” to “why her face is on a card”
Page 61 (The Arcane Three), change “there were three of them that continued” to “three of them continued”
Page 63 (La Pantera), change “decided to lay low” to “decided to lie low”
Page 64 (Joseph Mnguni), change “their eyes and nose” to “their eyes and noses” (plural)
Page 66 (Taco Temple), change “We had three years” to “We’ve had three years”
Page 66 (Taco Temple), change “how long its been” to “how long it’s been” (insert apostrophe)
Page 67 (It Is a Vehicle for Card Collectors), change “is unclear” to “are unclear”
Page 70 (Reading the Cards), change “Rather then being” to “Rather than being”
Page 70 (The Story of the Avenging Angel), change “There are many narratives that have popped up” to “Many narratives have popped up”
Page 71 (Five of Coins), use parentheses in pairs: (1) … (2) … etc.
Page 71 (Five of Coins), change “meant as an indicator” to “meant to indicate”
Page 71 (Seven of Cups), use parentheses in pairs: (1) … (2) … etc.
Page 71 (Seven of Cups), lowercase “numerically”
Page 86 (Introduction), change “be careful about not” to “be careful not” (delete “about”)
Page 86 (Batons Run), hyphenate “free-sim-drinks-for-everyone”
Page 96 (Cards as Augury), delete “from the 405 Hellhounds” (wrong sprawl)
Page 96 (Cards as Augury), change “the similarly” to “the similarity”
Page 96 (Cards as Augury), change “Merritsen was make” to “Merritsen was male.”
Page 96 (Cards as Augury), change “Are the prophecies of the irrevocable and unalterable?” to “Are the prophecies irrevocable and unalterable?” (delete “of the”)
Page 99 (The Shadows), change “might has well” to “might as well”
Page 100 (The Hermit), change “who to meet him” to “how to meet him.”
Page 100 (The Hermit), change “and outsider” to “an outsider”
Page 104 (Providing Warnings), change “blades in your back” to “blades in their back.”
Page 104 (Providing Warnings), change “harm to sasquatch settlement” to “harm to a sasquatch settlement” (insert “a”)
Page 104 (Providing Inspiration), change “Then there is the red-carpet affair” to just “The red-carpet affair” (delete “Then there is”)
Page 105 (Feeding the Copycats), change “the significance of the gathering that be sufficient for it to be depicted” to “whether any of these gatherings is the one depicted” or “why the gathering is significant enough to be depicted”
Page 105 (Feeding the Copycats), change “are leading mages” to “is leading mages”
Page 116 (The Awakened World), change “looking at the card in the mirror at the card’s reflection” to “looking at the card’s reflection in the mirror,”
Pages 120–134 (Character Trove), change “Chinese” to “Mandarin” or “Cantonese” (five times)
Pages 120–134 (Character Trove), change “Doc Wagon” to “DocWagon” (no space, three times)
Page 121 (Raven), change “in nearly every major culture” to “of nearly every major culture”
Page 121 (Raven), change “always making” to “always make”
Page 122 (Armando Salazar), change “Biotehcnology” to “Biotechnology”
Page 122 (Armando Salazar), change “Aztlander” to “Aztlaner”
Page 124 (Fargus Sol), change “PhD/T” to “Th.D.”
Page 124 (Fargus Sol), change “Disenchanging” to “Disenchanting”
Page 124 (Fargus Sol), change “Sperenthiel” to “Sperethiel”
Page 125 (Headhunter Member (Magician)), change “Foci” to “Sustaining focus”
Page 128 (Lady Xoc), change “as if she had 12 successes” to “as if she had 12 hits”
Page 133 (Rick Sorenson, Skills), delete second listing of “Thrown Weapons”
Page 133 (Amber Whiterose), change “Magical Phenomenon” to “Magical Phenomena”
Back Cover: change “Opportunity and adventure abounds.” to “Opportunity and adventure abound.”