Thanks all for the starting feed back, some good things I hadn't thought of in there.
Let me respond.
The danger of ignoring menials is: your dodging could be better; your Stun track is crap; you will never spot anything; you will probably offend the Johnson accidentally.
I guess your Qi Focus needs to be rating 4?
Personally I think the concept would be easier to do as a wired sam.
Agreed on the Dodging. For that matter, shifting Reaction to Intuition will get me same affect for initiative, almost, while helping out in things like Perception, how did I miss that one. /smack.
Hmm, the group has 2 Mage types so while I had considered Stun damage from spells & counted on counter-spelling to assist. Some I hadn't considered but you just triggered in my thoughts about Stun, the fact that with the armor I might actually be taking MORE stun than I do Phys Damage, which negates that whole Bod-11 thing. Might have to give up some of those yummy Bod points.
There is a face that can seduce her way into ANY situation. So this character is the "be quiet in the corner mungo" type. So I won't be speaking to Mr. J, unless things have gone horribly wrong.
Qi focus was for 3rd rank, sorry if that wasn't stated clear, yes, its Force-4.
With magic 5, a force 4 Qi Focus, a force 2 weapon focus, and 1s in mentals, aren't you going to become addicted pretty quickly?
Speaking of low mental stats, the first enemy mage with control thoughts you come across is going to have a field day.
Yikes, I hadn't even thought of Focus addiction, thanks, I'll have to make some changes there.
Addressed this one above. To an extent, I admit, partially Min/Max, partially character concept, I went with "big dumb ogre" on this, I freely admit it. But, I also know that the group has 2 Mage types and I'm counting on counter-spelling dice to help out with mental tests.
It's relatively minor compared to the perils of playing someone with those mental stats, but you can't pick Ultrasound for Improved Sense. You can only pick from sensory enhancements, and while Ultrasound is a sensor, it's not a sensory enhancement.
I know that one has been up for debate a lot but I've yet to see an actual ruling on it.
Meh, either way I could go with Low Light or Flare Comp for similar if different effects.
Thanks again all, I'll be making a few changes based on initial feedback.
Edit: Character adjusted above, and I see I only had 16 instead of 20 attributes assigned, doh, and none of you caught that, for shame j/k