Page 2 (Contents), change “Excerpt From Ares Intel Report” to “Excerpt from Ares Intel Report” (lowercase “from”)
Page 2 (Contents), change “New Rules for technomancers” to “New Rules for Technomancers” (capital “T”)
Page 5 (Introduction), change “that might about to be thrust” to “that might soon be thrust”
Page 10 (Heart of the Hive), change “audio files and from” to “audio files from” (delete “and”)
Page 12 (Transcript), change “those who have come before and yet to do so” to “those who have gone before and those who have yet to do so”
Page 18 (Ares Arms Begins Upgrade Program), change “Ares’ military units” to “Ares military units,” (delete apostrophe)
Page 39 (New Orleans), change “Some gangs have claim graveyards” to “Some gangs claim graveyards” (delete “have”)
Page 42 (Africa), change “the ghouls have hired the runners” to “the ghouls sometimes hire the runners”
Page 89 (A Sworn Testimony), put “who did what, when, and where” in quotes (and add a comma after “when”)
Page 91 (A Sworn Testimony), hyphenate “self-incrimination”
Page 92 (A Sworn Testimony), hyphenate “flat-footed”
Page 94 (Death), use parentheses in pairs and don’t capitalize mid-sentence: “(1) they are involved; and (2) they hope …”
Page 97 (The Card), use parentheses in pairs: “(1) It is … (2) Even if …”
Pages 100-101 (Revelations), italicize the book title: Tome of Revelations (three times)
Page 101 (Revelations), change “the smallest drip” to “the smallest drop”
Page 101 (Revelations), change “of our enemies” to “by our enemies”
Page 118, change “Well it’s a good a place as any” to “Well, it’s as good a place as any”
Page 127 (Deep Dive), change “half your age, minus seven” to “half your age, plus seven”
Page 130 (Null Overseers stat block), delete the non-Matrix Initiative lines and add a Matrix condition monitor.
Page 135 (Ordo Maximus), change “De Vries” to “de Vries” (lowercase “de,” twice)
Page 149 (Recent Troubles), change “Doc Spin” to “Dr. Spin”
Page 157 (table), change “full description” to “full descriptions” (plural)
Page 175 (The Mad Plane), change “best experienced rather than being described,” to “better experienced than described,”
Page 176 (The Mad Plane), change “most the structures” to “most structures” (delete “the”)
Page 176 (The Mad Plane), change “Most with some form” to “Most have some form”