Hello everybody, first post on this Forum and I Need help with a Little character of mine.
After trying out SR5 and not liking it my Group is reverting to Shadowrun 4E Anniversary with all it's flaws but also all of it's glory. So after tinkering around I decided to go with a classic street sam, an archetype I actually never played before (I am usually the Magic-guy, Phys-Adept, Mage and such are usually my territory). The characters are all built using Standard 750 Karma Generation but we are allowed to take more negative Qualities for flavour, we just don't get any Points for it (which I did, cause the character is in a terrible condition). So some critique on her would be nice.
Backstory:
Cybil Thomson's Family was on a great rise right after Crash 2.0 because her father had taken the opportunity to get into Business with very early Matrix 2.0 tech and made a Little fortune. At some Point though Cybil was bored of her life and ran away. A couple years later after getting involved with gangs and drugs and a boyfriend who died to lead-poisioning from an opposing gang she came back, badly broken, to her Family, only to find out that her Family wasn't in good shape either. Her parents both hadn't taken her disappearance well and essentially pissed away her father's fortune on alcohol and drugs. Cybil was completely annihilated with guilt even though her Family was happy to see her again. Cybil decided that she had to do something and so used her old contacts to get into Shadowrunning-business to help sustain her Family. Because of her guilt she has no regard for her own well-being as Long as she can function she doesn't care if it will shorten her lifespan or if it will cause her pain. In Addition she also makes some Money on the side as a stripper/hooker/pickpocket in a local bar. Her Family always wanted her to study and become famous as an engineer or Artist, that's why she just now started to study architecture even though she knows, that she's not all that smart, that's why her Goal is to acquire a cerebral Booster so that she can pass the exams. Making Money on the fronts and studying take up practically all of her freetime, so most Relaxation she gets is taking drugs. She especially likes novacoke and has gotten hooked on it again (even though she was clean shortly after she came back) because she has found out that it does not only make her work as a hooker bearable, it makes it actually fun, most of the times at least.
Sheet:
== Info ==
Street Name:
Name: Cybil Thomson
Movement: 10/25, Swim: 6
Karma: 0
Street Cred: 0
Notoriety: 1
Public Awareness: 0
Elf Age 22
Height 1,80 m Weight 72 kg
Composure: 7
Judge Intentions: 7
Lift/Carry: 10 (90 kg/60 kg)
Memory: 6
Nuyen: 0
== Attributes ==
BOD: 4
AGI: 6 (
REA: 6 (
STR: 4 (6)
CHA: 3
INT: 4
LOG: 2
WIL: 4
EDG: 2
== Derived Attributes ==
Essence: 0,28
Initiative: 10 (12)
IP: 1 (3)
Matrix Initiative: 9
Matrix IP: 3
Physical Damage Track: 10
Stun Damage Track: 10
== Active Skills ==
Animal Handling : 0 Pool: 3
Animal Training : 0 Pool: 3
Archery : 0 Pool: 7
Armorer : 0 Pool: 1
Artisan : 0 Pool: 3
Automatics : 4 [Assault Rifles] Pool: 12 (14)
Blades : 4 [Swords] Pool: 12 (14)
Climbing : 4 Pool: 11
Clubs : 0 Pool: 7
Computer : 0 Pool: 1
Con : 1 [Seduction] Pool: 13 (15)
Cybercombat : 0 Pool: 1
Data Search : 0 Pool: 1
Demolitions : 0 Pool: 1
Disguise : 2 Pool: 6
Diving : 0 Pool: 3
Dodge : 0 Pool: 7
Escape Artist : 0 Pool: 7
Etiquette : 0 Pool: 2
First Aid : 0 Pool: 1
Flight : 4 Pool: 11
Forgery : 0 Pool: 7
Gunnery : 0 Pool: 7
Gymnastics : 4 Pool: 14
Hacking : 0 Pool: 1
Heavy Weapons : 0 Pool: 7
Infiltration : 2 Pool: 11
Instruction : 0 Pool: 2
Intimidation : 0 Pool: 2
Leadership : 0 Pool: 2
Locksmith : 0 Pool: 7
Longarms : 0 Pool: 7
Navigation : 0 Pool: 3
Negotiation : 0 Pool: 2
Palming : 2 Pool: 11
Parachuting : 0 Pool: 3
Perception : 2 Pool: 9
Pilot Ground Craft : 1 [Bike] Pool: 9 (11)
Pilot Watercraft : 0 Pool: 7
Pistols : 4 [Semi-Automatics] Pool: 12 (14)
Riding : 0 Pool: 7
Running : 4 Pool: 12
Shadowing : 2 Pool: 6
Survival : 0 Pool: 3
Swimming : 4 Pool: 11
Throwing Weapons : 0 Pool: 7
Tracking : 0 Pool: 3
Unarmed Combat : 4 [Martial Arts] Pool: 12 (14)
== Knowledge Skills ==
Architecture : 3 Pool: 5
Area Knowledge Seattle : 2 Pool: 6
Clubbing : 2 Pool: 6
Drugs : 3 Pool: 7
English : N Pool: 0
Gangs : 3 Pool: 7
Implants : 2 Pool: 4
== Contacts ==
Hacko (2, 3)
Mr Mister (4, 1)
== Qualities ==
Addiction (Moderate) (Novacoke)
Day Job (40 hrs/week)
Dependent (Demanding)
Guts
Implant-Induced Immune Deficiency
In Debt (30,000¥)
Low-Light Vision
Natural Athlete
SINner (Standard) (Seattle)
Toughness
== Lifestyles ==
Parental Suite 1 months
Comforts: Middle
Entertainment: Low
Necessities: Middle
Neighborhood: Middle
Security: High
Qualities: Living with Parents [-2LP]
== Cyberware/Bioware ==
Attention Coprocessor Rating 3
Auto-Injector (Reusable) Rating 3
Biomonitor
Breast Implants
Cyberears Rating 1
+Ear Recording Unit
+Sound Link
+Audio Enhancement Rating 3
+Damper
Cybereyes Basic System Rating 3
+Eye Recording Unit
+Image Link
+Smartlink
+Vision Enhancement Rating 3
+Vision Magnification
+Thermographic Vision
Datajack
Enhanced Articulation
Fiberoptic Hair
Gecko Hands
Muscle Augmentation Rating 2
Muscle Toner Rating 2
Sim Module (Hot-Sim Modified)
Tailored Pheromones Rating 3
Wired Reflexes Rating 2
== Armor ==
Form-Fitting Half-Body Suit4/1
SecureTech Arm Casings 0/1
SecureTech Leg Casings 0/1
Vashon Island: Steampunk Blouse/Shirt1/1
Vashon Island: Steampunk Corset/Vest2/2
Vashon Island: Steampunk Overcoat3/3
== Weapons ==
Katana
+Personalized Grip, Melee
Pool: 13 (15) DV: 6P AP: -1 RC: 0
Nitama Optimum II
+Gas-Vent 3 System
+Shock Pad
+Stock
+Personalized Grip
+Smartgun System
Pool: 14 (16) DV: 6P AP: -1 RC: 4
Ruger Super Warhawk
+Personalized Grip
+Smartgun System
Pool: 14 DV: 6P AP: -2 RC: 1
Unarmed Attack
Pool: 12 DV: 5S AP: - RC: 0
== Martial Arts ==
Muay Thai
++1 DV on Unarmed Combat attacks
++1 DV on Unarmed Combat attacks
Finishing Move
Full Offense
Set-Up
Watchful Guard
== Commlink ==
Hermes Ikon (4, 6, 6, 3)
+Mapsoft (Seattle) Rating 6
+Printer
+Satellite Link
+Novatech Navi
+Biometric Lock
+Customized Interface
+Suite: Pro User [Analyze 4, Browse 4, Command 2, Edit 4]
+Empathy Software Rating 6
== Gear ==
Ammo: Regular Ammo (Heavy Pistols) x100
Ammo: Regular Ammo (Assault Rifles) x100
Ammo: Regular Ammo (Shotguns) x100
Antibac x3
Cram x20
Disposable Syringe x100
eX x20
Fake License (Wired Reflexes) Rating 4
Fake License (Ruger Super Warhawk) Rating 4
Fake License (Katana) Rating 4
Fake License (Ruger Super Warhawk) Rating 4
Fake License (Smartgun System) Rating 4
Fake SIN (Seattle) Rating 4
Guts x10
Inline Skates
Long Haul x10
Lucifer Lamp
Mapsoft (Seattle) Rating 6
Novacoke x20
Psyche x5
Standard Parachute
Zeta-Interferon x3
== Vehicles ==
Harley-Davidson Scorpion (Chopper)
+Vehicle Sensor
Any Input/suggestions on optimizing on stats or ideas for maybe changing/expanding the negative Qualities based on her backstory would be welcome =).
