I enjoyed it, there were a number of touches--like how First Impression would work--that I thought you pulled off well.
A few quick thoughts. I apologize for the format, but I'm at work so I'm going for speed.
1. It's not an error, but the switch in tense in the first paragraph ("What I got...." vs. "What I have..." is jarring to the reader since you're establishing the first-person present tense narrative.
2. I'm sure it's done to evoke stream of consciousness, but the number of "Anyway" on the first page alone is distracting. It's repeated throughout, so I take it that you were establishing a personality quirk, but it makes the narration a little jumpy. Jumpy narrators are fine, but the reader shouldn't feel distracted.
3. The narration of the chase lacks tension. The writing could be choppier and more frenetic. Having an aside about the narrator's workout schedule is great flavor in terms of world building, but it doesn't convey the stakes of the scene.
4. There's a certain sameness to your sentence construction. Subject - Verb - DO. This is an easy things to fall into while writing in the first person, but it can become flat for the reader after a few pages.
5. Although I disagree with Vonnegut when it comes to semi-colons, you seem to use them in clusters and it's not always clear exactly why. Conversely, you separate certain clauses that work better together. "I pass my hand though my hair. I notice it has a slight tremble." Neither of those really work as clauses independent of one another, so you should combine them. "My hand trembles slightly as I pass it through my hair." Or whatever.
6. This may be an issue of audience, but some things felt over-explained. "...I make sure the teams I send to their death don't come back." Brief aside: this is a good example of where not to use a semi-colon. This sentence is much more sinister and powerful when it stands alone. Whether or not you even need the sentence is debatable. The reader should be able to infer that he's never had the problem precisely because all the teams he sends to die stay dead and letting that unspoken truth hang over things creates more dread than having the narrator lay it all out.
7. ZOMG that drone!
But I really did enjoy it. I thought the downtime scenes between the narrator and the team were particularly good, giving the reader a good sense of not just personality, but also how personal dynamics work in the shadows.
