And the first review is in. Negative it might be, but thank you for taking the time to share! Communities grow when people chip in.
The official population numbers from 2062 are 105 million, with 4% Elf, 8% Dwarf, 19% Ork, 3% Troll, and 0% other. The larger numbers of Orks and Trolls, and smaller numbers of Elves, has been talked about in books before. The Tir Taingire sourcebook, in particular, contained many theories about why it happened, and why the numbers are different in different areas. A painful connection that they found was wealth ... wealthier people were more likely to have Elves, poor more likely to have Orks. It was some uncomfortable science, or "science", to say the least. You'll find that the wealthier states have a smaller Ork population, and poor sections a larger one, which might be evidence for the theory, but it might also be coincidence... you'll also find that areas with higher Ork populations have a higher magical content, while areas with less Orks also have less magic. There are more factors at work than it might first seem.
Space issues and word count did involve the last few states getting shorted, and I apologize for that, but, to me, it was more important that they all get at least a token nod and some plot hooks, so that they could be expanded on later, rather than the usual "Texas, Atlanta, New Orleans, Done" treatment that the CAS has gotten over the years. I hope that future authors (And GMs!) will take the seeds from here and grow them larger. As for the voice, there are four different contributors in there, each with their own biases and interests. Each reflects that the CAS is largely an inward-looking country that's really more a coalition of states than a single real nation (Though there is a movement to change that, as you can see when reading more.) ... so, there's some sniping at one another, dismissing of concerns, and a notation here or there that someone's bias is clearly showing.
This should probably go in the OTHER thread, however, as this one was about getting people excited before the book released, and now that it is, this one should probably be left fallow. Again, thank you for your comments! I'm sorry that you're not happy with the book, but feel free to give suggestions on how it may be improved, as well as point out areas that might need correction. (The Kudzu speed, by the by, isn't one. It was supposed to have been a quiet change that most didn't notice. You got it straight out. Well done!)