Interested in critique and technical review ... I'm working on a new character and am developing the back story. It's a step a bit out of my comfort zone. There are alot of military references (mostly team names and ranks) that I'm hoping I've used correctly, or at least acceptably within the shadowrun universe.
Don't be shy with your comments, I've got pretty thick skin and I kinda expect a bit of a beating heh...
the next section to be written will be the character, Mors Origana, waking up ... with very little memory left...
