Shadowrun
Shadowrun Play => Character creation and critique => Topic started by: Aria on <09-06-19/1221:55>
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I had a version of Lily for 5E that is/was rather OTT: https://stormy-waters-2075.obsidianportal.com/characters/shs---lily but in a reversal of the recent Alita film I've created a 'new' version of her which is considerably less powerful (although hopefully ok within the scope of the current 6E rules)
So, my first attempt at a 6E character for critique please :)
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Name & Principle Alias Project Javelin "Lily"
Ethnicity & Metatype Caucasian Cyborg
Born Unknown Sex Female Height Small Build Slight
Nationality None
Race D Attributes B Magic E Skills C Resources A
Attributes
Body: 4
Agility: 10
Reaction: 5
Strength: 6
Willpower: 3
Logic: 2
Intuition: 4
Charisma: 3
Edge: 5
Magic/Resonance: 0
Essence: 0.12
Initiative: 8+2D6
Matrix VR Initiative: 8+2D6 +1D6 HotSIM
Phys CM: 15
Stun CM: 10
Surprise: 9
Composure: 6
Judge Intentions: 7
Memory: 5
Lift/Carry: 360kgs
Defence Rating 15
Attack Rating Unarmed 11
Primary Attack Rating Ranged 10/10/8/--/--
Primary Attack Rating Melee 5/--/--/--/--
Positive Qualities / Racial Bonuses
Ambidextrous
Candle in the Darkness
Negative Qualities / Racial Penalties
Stolen Gear [Body] 13
Code of Honour [Bushido]
Distinctive Style [Handcrafted cyborg body]
Skills
Astral 0 ( / )
Athletics 4 ( 14 )
Biotech 0 ( / )
Close Combat 6 ( 16 ) S: Unarmed
Con 1 ( 4 )
Conjuring 0 ( / )
Cracking 0 ( / )
Electronics 0 ( 1 )
Enchanting 0 ( / )
Engineering 0 ( 1 )
Exotic Weapons 0 ( / )
Firearms 3 ( 13 ) S: Pistols
Influence 0 ( 2 )
Outdoors 0 ( 3 )
Perception 2 ( 6 )
Piloting 1 ( 6 )
Sorcery 0 ( / )
Stealth 3 ( 13 )
Tasking 0 ( / )
Knowledge / Language Skills
English
Transhumanism
Seattle Shadows
Cyber & Bioware
Alphaware Cybereyes [3] w. Image Link, Flare Compensation, Lowlight, Thermographic, Vision Enhancement
Alphaware Cyberears [3] w. Soundlink, Damper, Balance Augmenter
Alphaware 4 obvious limbs & torso, Arms Str 6, Agi 10. Legs Str 6, Agi 7, Armour 3 to legs and torso (+9DR) +5 Condition monitor
Alphaware R Arm Shock limb [4S(e), 5/—/—/—/—]
Alphaware L Arm Retractable spur [3P, 7/—/—/—/—]
Alphaware Hydraulic Jacks [6] both legs, Alphaware Shock limbs [4S(e), 5/—/—/—/—]
Alphaware Internal Air Tank [3]
Wired Reflexes [1]
Gear
2x Ares Predator VI [3P, SA/BF, 10/10/8/—/—, 15(c)] w. Integral Smartgun, Silencer, Concealable Holster, 2 Spare Clips, 30 Caseless Normal Rnds, 20 Caseless Explosive Rnds, 10 Caseless APDS Rnds, 10 Caseless SnS Rnds (Clip load 10 Normal, 2 Explosive, 2 APDS, 1 SnS)
Ares Light Fire 70 [2P, SA, 10/7/6/—/—, 16(c)] w. Laser Sight, Special Silencer, Concealable Holster, 2 Spare Clips, 50 Caseless Normal Rnds
3 Thermal Smoke, 2 Flashbangs, 1 CS Gas Grenade
Electrochromic armour clothing [2]
Micro Transceiver & Subvocal Mic, Metalink Disposable Commlink [R1, D/F 1/0, P0], Fake SIN [1] , Fake Licence [1], AR Gloves, Local Area Mapsoft
Transys Avalon [R6, D/F 4*/1, P3] w. HotSIM module, Browse, Edit, Toolbox* Programs, Fake SIN [4], 3x Fake Licence [4] w. Driver, Weapon, Concealed Carry
Respirator [6], Lowlight Flashlight, Bug Scanner, Tag Eraser, 10x Plastic Restraints, Medkit [3], 2x Stim Patch [4], Trauma Patch, 2x Tranq Patch [6]
Contacts [2] w. Imagelink, Flare Compensation, Glasses [3]* w. Vision Magnification, Vision Enhancement, Ear Buds [3]* w. Sound Link, Audio Enhancement (* capacity left)
Lifestyle
1 month Low Lifestyle
Karma Expenditure
Starting Karma 50
Racial Costs 0
Qualities 9
Negative Qualities 29
Attributes 60
Skills 10
Resources 0
Remaining 0
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I'm impressed how much better the concept works in this new edition.
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I'm impressed how much better the concept works in this new edition.
Never saw people try to make it in 5e, but what would make it hard. Its pretty much just full body replacement except head and wired 1? While no one in my groups tried that in 5e, it seems pretty feasible at char gen.