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[5e] Technomancer StreetDoc. Need advice

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Arcum:
Hello guys ! I just joigned a party and make a new character. Its my first techno and also my first matrix user. I have read intensivly the matrix rules and the forum on how to build my techno but i need your personal advice on how well this chum will be, and if my futur choice are relatable and good.

Actually the campagn is rough, during creation i spend karma for nuyen, for gear aaaand its gone: first game i wake up naked in a new and futuristic city, near a cloning facility with a data pile on my neck. Yeah, altered carbon style. I was very surprises but hey its like that.

So make me introduce myself:

== Personal Data ==
Name: Wojindoutao Wong                  Alias: 404
Dwarf, M                               
Movement: 2/4 (1m/hit)                 
                   

== Priorities ==
Metatype: B
Attributes: D
Special: C technomancer
Skills: A
Resources: E

== Attributes ==
BOD: 3                                  CHA: 1
AGI: 1                                  INT: 5
REA: 1                                  LOG: 5
STR: 3                                  WIL: 8
EDG: 2                                  RES: 6

== Derived Attributes
Essence: 6.00                           Initiative:          6 +1d6
Physical: 4                             Matrix AR:           6 +1d6
Mental: 8                               Matrix Cold:         10 +3d6
Social: 6                               Matrix Hot:          10 +4d6
Astral: 8

== Active Skills ==
Biotechnology                           Base:4  Pool:9
Compiling (Machine Sprite)              Base:6  Pool:12(14)
Computer (Matrix Perception)            Base:6  Pool:11(13)
Cybercombat                             Base:6  Pool:11
Cybertechnology                         Base:4   Pool:9
Electronic Warfare                      Base:6  Pool:11
First Aid                               Base:4  Pool:9
Gymnastics                              Base:2  Pool:3
Hacking                                 Base:6  Pool:11
Hardware (Jack Out)                     Base:6   Pool:11(13)
Medicine                                Base:4  Pool:9
Pistols (Semi-Automatics)               Base:4   Pool:5(7)
Registering (Machine Sprite)            Base:6   Pool:12(14)
Running (Urban)                         Base:2   Pool:5(7)
Sneaking (Urban)                        Base:6  Pool:7(9)
Software (Marionnettiste)               Base:6   Pool:11(13)

== Knowledge Skills ==  Fluff
English                                 Native
Mandarin                                Base:5    Pool:10
Area Knowledge: Seattle (Seattle Matrix) Base:3   Pool:8(10)
Data Havens (Middle East)               Base:1   Pool:6(8
Matrix Games (Shadowrun Online)         Base:1   Pool:6(8
News (Business)                         Base:1   Pool:6(8
Popular Music (Dwarven Punkbilly)       Base:1   Pool:6(8
Street Drugs                            Base:1   Pool:6
Triads                                  Base:2   Pool:7

== Qualities ==
Addiction (Moderate) (Long cours)
Addiction (Moderate) (Psyche)
Exceptional Attribute (WIL)
Focused Concentration (2)
Prejudiced (Common, Outspoken) (Corpo slave)
Resistance to Pathogens/Toxins
Technomancer
Thermographic Vision


== Complex Forms ==
Cleaner
Diffusion of [Firewall]
Infusion of [Sleaze]
Puppeteer
Resonance Veil
Static Veil
Transcendent Grid

== Lifestyle ==
Low(Low)1 Month
   + Extra Secure
   + Obscure/Difficult to Find [+10%]

== Armor == What i have bougth, but i have nothing.
Clothing                                 0
Helmet                                  +2
   + Trodes

== Weapons == What i have bougth, but i have nothing.
Remington Roomsweeper
   Pool: 7      Accuracy: 4     DV: 7P       AP: -1    RC: 2
Unarmed Attack
   Pool: 0      Accuracy: 4     DV: 3S       AP: -     RC: 2

== Commlink == What i have bougth, but i have nothing.
Living Persona(ATT: 1,SLZ: 5,DP: 5,FWL: 8
Meta Link(ATT: 0,SLZ: 0,DP: 1,FWL: 1)
   + Commlink Functionality [Camera, Micro, Chip Player, Credstick Reader, Earbuds 1, GPS Guidance System, Micro Trid-Projector, Music Player, RFID Tag Scanner, Shock- and Water-Resistant Case, Touchscreen Display]

== Gear: Equipped == What i have bougth, but i have nothing.
Ammo: Stick-n-Shock (Heavy Pistols) 80
Biomonitor
Certified Credstick, Gold
Certified Credstick, Standard 4
Data Tap
Datachip 10
Encryption
Fake SIN (Spider) Rating 4
Gas Mask
Micro-Transceiver
Sensor Tags 10
Signal Scrub
Spare Clip (Remington Roomsweeper) 8
Standard Tags 40
Stealth Tags 20
Virtual Machine


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As you can see, its the typical technomancer in the van. He has REALLY poor physical attribute and charisme (so Sleaze way). With drugs, psyche, long haul, maybe cerebrax and maybe Trance i think he will be better. I cant go with the guys in the Run so i go few day before the run and stay awake for collect data and marks, from afar. I will search noise reduction as fast as possible. He has also good biotech skill (group 4) and he can help other member of the team.

For my progression i want to buy with nuyen:
kesnel fabric,
directional jammer (on me)

i want to buy with karma:
submersion 1: Smoke and mirror program
submersion 2: FFF
submersion 3: signal scrub
submersion 4: Quiet echo
And maybe Resonnance Channel complex form in between.

Like that i am very stealthy and i build a huge pile of noise for other, and noise reduction for me and i really think its the better way to deal with spider or other matrix danger. It permit me to stay away from the danger, but no skinlinks and i know its near mandatory. I have also a ninja-matrix style, with infusion of sleaze and smoke and mirror for huge Sleaze score, and if things dont go well, with good willpower i can sustain the danger long enough for my sprite to do the work.

What can you say about it guys ?

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