Shadowrun
Shadowrun Play => Character creation and critique => Topic started by: chadawc on <02-01-20/0305:51>
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Any help at figuring out what I missed and how to make this better for hunting monsters would be awesome.
== Personal Data ==
Street Name:
Name: Unnamed Character
Movement:8/16 (2m/hit)
Swim:3 (1m/hit)
Karma: 0
Street Cred: 0
Notoriety: 0
Public Awareness: 0
Human
Composure: 8
Judge Intentions: 5
Lift/Carry: 5 (30 kg/20 kg)
Memory: 11
Nuyen:608.33¥
== Priorities ==
Metatype: D,1
Attributes: B,3
Special: C,2
Skills: A,4
Resources: E,0
== Attributes ==
Current Form:
BOD: 3
AGI: 4
REA: 3
STR: 2
CHA: 2
INT: 3
LOG: 5
WIL: 6
EDG: 2
MAG: 6
== Derived Attributes ==
Essence: 6.00
Initiative: 6 +1d6
Rigger Initiative: 6 +1d6
Astral Initiative: 6 +3d6
Matrix AR: 6 +1d6
Matrix Cold: 6 +3d6
Matrix Hot: 6 +4d6
Physical Damage Track: 10
Stun Damage Track: 11
== Limits ==
Physical: 4
Mental: 7
Vision Enhancement [+3] (Only for Perception (Visual))
Social: 6
Astral: 7
== Active Skills ==
Assensing Base:6 Pool:12
Automatics (Machine Pistols) Base:6 Pool:13(15)
Banishing Base:6 Pool:12
Binding Base:6 Pool:12
Counterspelling Base:6 Pool:12
Etiquette Base:6 Pool:8
Gymnastics Base:4 Pool:8
Perception (Visual) Base:6 Pool:12(14)
Running Base:4 Pool:6
Spellcasting (Combat) Base:6 Pool:12(14)
Summoning Base:6 Pool:12
Swimming Base:4 Pool:6
Tracking (Urban) Base:6 Pool:9(11)
== Knowledge Skills ==
English Native
Area Knowledge: Local area Base:4 Pool:7
Magical Theory (Academic) Base:2 Pool:7
Magical Threats Base:6 Pool:11
Parazoology Base:4 Pool:9
== Contacts ==
Harold Grailson ;current city;Monster hunter(2, 4)
== Qualities ==
Allergy (Uncommon, Moderate) (Silver)
Day Job (20 hrs) (Work at the local zoo)
Focused Concentration (4)
Mystic Adept
SINner (National) (UCAS)
== Tradition ==
Zoroastrianism,Resist Drain with:11
== Spells ==
Ball Lightning DV: F-1
Detect Enemies, Extended DV: F
Heal DV: F-4
Increase Reflexes DV: F
Lightning Bolt DV: F-3
== Powers ==
Astral Perception
Combat SenseRating: 2
Enhanced Accuracy (skill) (Automatics)
Enhanced PerceptionRating: 3
Heightened Concentration
Improved Ability (skill) (Automatics)Rating: 3
Improved Sense (High frequency )
Improved Sense (Smell)
Improved Sense (Thermographic )
== Lifestyle ==
Crappy appartment(Low)1 Month
+ Cramped [-10%]
+ Dangerous Area [-20%]
+ DocWagon Contract, Basic [+416.67¥]
+ Obscure/Difficult to Find [+10%]
+ Grid Subscription (Public Grid) [+50¥]
== Armor ==
Armor Jacket 12
== Weapons ==
Ares Crusader II
+ Gas-Vent 2 System
+ Smartgun System, Internal
Pool: 13 (15) Accuracy: 5 (8) DV: 7P AP: - RC: 4
Unarmed Attack
Pool: 3 Accuracy: 4 DV: 2S AP: - RC: 2
== Commlink ==
Renraku Sensei(ATT: 0,SLZ: 0,DP: 3,FWL: 3)
+ Commlink Functionality[Camera, Micro, Chip Player, Credstick Reader, Earbuds 1, GPS Guidance System, Micro Trid-Projector, Music Player, RFID Tag Scanner, Shock- and Water-Resistant Case, Touchscreen Display]
+ Browse ×3
+ Encryption ×3
== Gear: Equipped ==
Ammo: Explosive Rounds (Machine Pistols) ×40
Ammo: Gel Rounds (Machine Pistols) ×40
Ammo: Regular Ammo (Machine Pistols) ×200
Ammo: Stick-n-Shock (Machine Pistols) ×40
Contacts Rating 3
+ Vision Enhancement Rating 3
Glasses Rating 4
+ Smartlink
+ Flare Compensation
+ Vision Magnification
+ Image Link
Magical Lodge Materials (Zoroastrianism) Rating 5
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Just some small things, others can probably give you much better and extensive advice
- You are quite light on contacts. You might want to get at least also a fixer to get new stuff unless you play in a very close group and can leech off from a other PC for that
- No fake SIN? Thats imo a big problem unless your group agreed to ignore that or you play a legit campaign.
What exactly is your definition of monster? Depending on your target a MP might be a bit too light to do much good. But that you can upgrade later.
You might also want to think about what you want to do more, spellcasting or shooting and only specialize in one of that at first, but that is fine tuning. The Improved Sense powers can also easily be replicated by gear if you want the PP for something else.