I didn't see a skilljack? You really need one of those. I'd also get a Skillwire Subscription, would be huge for this character, even the 10k Silver subscription.
Perception and Etiquette to low to be particularly useful. For Skills "E" characters I'd suggest pick 3 skills, take a 6 in them and use Karma for the rest.
I prefer to max out Agility on combat characters, YMMV. Your dice pools are low compared to most combat focused characters.
I don't like Cybereyes on Metahumans. I prefer to just grab the Smartgun link and move on, you've got natural Thermo. Also DataJack or 'Trodes?
In General I've found Move By Wire to be too expensive for what you get, once you add in the 10 karma for Restricted gear. And on a Agiility 4, Cha 2, Logic 2, you're really not getting much use out of the skill wires. YMMV though.