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Mors Origana ... the Back Story

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ShadowSmith

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« on: <12-12-12/0216:33> »
Interested in critique and technical review ... I'm working on a new character and am developing the back story. It's a step a bit out of my comfort zone. There are alot of military references (mostly team names and ranks) that I'm hoping I've used correctly, or at least acceptably within the shadowrun universe.

Don't be shy with your comments, I've got pretty thick skin and I kinda expect a bit of a beating heh...

the next section to be written will be the character, Mors Origana, waking up ... with very little memory left...
“Run when you have to, fight when you must, rest when you can.”
― Robert Jordan, The Eye of the World

ShadowSmith

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« Reply #1 on: <12-14-12/1542:37> »
okay, so I'll assume that I'm in the mediocre/not worth commenting realm... not so horrible that it's kinder to just end the madness ... no where near spectacular enough to laud...

okie doke ...  ;D
“Run when you have to, fight when you must, rest when you can.”
― Robert Jordan, The Eye of the World

Crunch

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« Reply #2 on: <12-14-12/2223:11> »
Post the character in text and you'll get more responses.

Deepeyes

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« Reply #3 on: <05-24-15/1903:33> »
Pretty good story man!