You have Lucky and Edge 2?
You are paying 10 bp and a Body to be a human.
You have no logic skills. None. -1 Logic, +1 Intuition is a no-brainer and I would really recommend losing another Logic for +1 Reaction.
You have Disguise 4, Infiltration 2, Palming 2, and Shadowing 5, for which you are paying 52 points. You should just pay 40 points for Stealth 4, and make Perception 6.
Blades, Dodge, Pistols, Longarms, and Gymnastics [from Athletics] is about 3 combat skills too many. Specifically:
You never actually want to attack with Blades; even against people in melee with you, you are better off shooting them.
You don't need Dodge and Blades and Gymnastics. You need one source of melee passive defense and one source of full defense, not two of each.
Lots of skills at 2-3 is bad; try to cut down a little and get skills to 4 for karma efficiency.
I would recommend cutting Blades and Dodge and picking up Unarmed, or ditching Blades and Athletics (or cutting Athletics down to 1) and getting dodge.
I notice you are a PI who doesn't have Con or Negotiation. This is a problem for you, because those are your options for opposing Con, which means you suck at telling if people are lying to you. You do have Etiquette. I would consider dropping that and picking up Con, or Negotiation, or the Influence group instead.
Dermal plating is not very good. If you're going to get cheap stuff at chargen and upgrade later [nothing wrong with this if you don't mind being less good now for more good later], I would recommend firstly checking if used 'ware is allowed [Augmentation, half price, x1.2 essence], and second if you want "cheap and crappy but effective" - Muscle Replacement is the way to roll. The high essence cost doesn't matter when you have little ware (and you replace it later), and it's cheap and efficient. Attention Coprocessor is another very cheap and very good piece of ware.
Your armor is heavier than you can wear. You should probably wear a FFBA half-suit or full suit and the Synergist coat if you want the -2 concealing option, then supplement with PPP to get to your cap.
You should be using goggles/glasses/contacts/earbuds with vision and hearing enhancements. This also lets you get smartlink instead of laser sights.
Neither pistols nor shotguns can accept Gas Vent systems. The T-250 is a terrible weapon whose only use is being the only concealable longarm; as a pistols/longarms user it is pointless. The Ruger Thunderbolt is a good gun, you just need to mod it differently; check the first link in my sig and the Gunslinger or Ghost for examples / other good pistols. As for longarms, the AA16 is the best shotgun in a "no contest" sort of way because it has magical gas-vents, but you can't start with it. The Barrett is the best sniper rifle but again you can't start with it. You could use restricted gear, but I don't recommend that; I suggest starting with a sport rifle as a poor man's sniper rifle. The Terracotta Arms Caravan (Gun Heaven 2) is my recommendation.
