I like the premise, but there are a few things here that could go pear shaped....
A) CEO's don't meet runners.Plausible deniability is required for any criminal dealings...
B) Runners rarely know who they're actually working for. If there's no strong reason to tell them, don't. Why would an employer just hand over such leverage to known criminals?
C) By 'Enemy perception of 5', is that 5 Skill or 5 Successes?
D) Why is the Johnson recommending any Lone Star involvement? Including Lone Star is a complicated issue for any runner:
- Initiating combat with them is a risky, long term problem (Lone star gun cams, surveillance drones etc)
- The Mob will be very suspicious of any co-incidental help such as 'Well, we were in the neighbourhood and wanted to rick arrest to help you out with Lone Star. No reason....'
Unless the Johnson has a specific reason to mess with Lone Star (for another personal agenda) this seems unnecessarily complicated for an initial run.
E) How about a simpler mission brief?
- 'Mob soldier Tony Russo has learned information regarding Synergistic Technologies. It's valuable, and I want it, discreetly and courteously. He must not be harmed...'
Then let the players have a few brain-storming options as to how to do this:
- Does Tony have any vices to exploit?
- Is the information stored on file requiring a local hack?
- Do you need to slip the guy a Mickey to get him to talk, and wipe his memory?
- Is the information for sale?
I find it much easier to tell a group What needs to be done (eg get information from X), and what limitations need to be addressed (eg X must be unharmed).
Then let the PC's work on the 'How'. Give them hints via legwork if you want:
- Contact A says X has a mistress on the side, calls her at least once a every day
- Hack B shows X has an offline data storage at home with voiceprint access
- Bartender C advises that X is always at Pub Z on Wednesday nights.
As GM, you've now advised the PC's that X is away on Wednesday night, data needs voiceprint access, and he uses his voice every day calling his mistress. Bingo, 3-step mission.