Pretty good. Again, lots of comments below but don't take them to mean that the character is bad. For an early draft, it's quite good.
Triads can be non-humans, no problem. It's the Yakuza who would have a problem with metahumans.
Personally, I would consider swapping Resources D and Metatype E and put the extra points into Edge. You need those extra Magic points for reasons detailed below. You can bridge the gap by converting some karma to nuyen, or by taking the In Debt quality. You also have more fancy stuff than you need, like a 5,000 nuyen apartment and 13K armor.
Magic C gets you a rating 2 Active skill. You can't use it on Improved Reflexes, which is not a skill. The good news is that if you get Magic 6 (per above) then you can leave your Power Point spending largely in place. The catch is that Improved Reflexes costs 2.5 (not 2.0) power points.
Reaction is 5 (7) due to Improved Reflexes.
I'd do the "drop Logic to 1 and buy it back up to 2 with 10 karma and put the saved Attribute point somewhere" trick. An extra point of Intuition would be very helpful.
In fact, you don't really need Strength. Humans are never going to be very competitive as unarmed brawlers unless they have a cyberarm, which is a viable but separate situation. Your Strength will never be high enough, even with Critical Strike or knucks as a weapon focus: after all that, it's still not as effective as your shock glove.
BUT, the great salvation - which you've discovered - is Nerve Strike. Not only does this effectively shorten the condition monitor of your target (as Reaction and/or Agility will usually be in the 3-6 range, rather than a more typical 11 boxes on a condition monitor), but it also provides much more of a debuff when you connect (as each point of damage turns into a negative modifier, instead of every 3 points on a condition monitor). The catch is that it doesn't work on things like drones and spirits, but you have your shock glove for those.
You don't have the Assensing skill so you currently can't make use of your Astral Perception power. This power is a good choice for a qi focus, if you want to save up for one. Plus Triads love their qi tattoos.
Instead, check out Magic Sense (a hugely beneficial power, none of my adepts leave home without it) or - if you're going the face route - check out Authoritative Tone and/or Cool Resolve.
For skills, you need Perception. No exceptions.
If you're going the secondary face route, I'd put your skill group points into Influence and your individual skill points into the skills from Athletics that you want (Gymnastics, Running). I'd rather have Etiquette at 5 and Swimming at 1 than the reverse, which is the current situation.
Those earbuds still need to be R2 to handle both those modifications.
Your fixer contact costs too much. The Connection + Loyalty limit at chargen is 7. Since the fixer is Connection 4 + Loyalty 4, it is over this limit. This does leave you in an awkward spot where you have 1 free point of karma leftover for contacts. See if you can scrape up another point of karma for a Connection 1, Loyalty 1 contact. Street kids are a good option, as they can be good eyes and ears on the grounds.
Hope that helps! Good luck and have fun.
