I'm working my way through the book, but had a couple more nits:
- the text suggests that the world at large knows about CFD, i.e., that the viral encephalitis cover given in Boston Lockdown has blown. Would have been interested to see how the cover blew, and the reaction thereto;
- trigger warning on p.45: I think trigger warnings are a bit absurd as a general proposition, and especially for a game that involves characters that shoot people in the face for a living.
Overall, though, am enjoying the book.