The old Sprawl Sites book has a wonderful encounter with a gang boss who is in denial about being a street shaman:
"Magic? That's crapola the corps spread around to keep us in our place. Magic is a gun, and I'm a mage."
(The same gang boss has another one of my favorite lines: "If you can see it, you can shoot it. If you can shoot it, you can kill it. If it dies, it ain't tough." Knucks will almost certainly be mentioning one or both of these lines at some point in Trial by Fire.)
@Bangbang, I'll let rednblack handle most of the critique since I already chimed in on the character creation thread. But, that said, a few thoughts come to mind:
1) A point in Etiquette is customary.
2) You have 10 HE grenades and Str 1. (Also, Throwing Weapons 0.) If you haven't looked at the grenade throwing ranges with Str 1, I encourage you to do so. I also strongly request insist that you not use any around me.
3) You'll have to sustain Increase Intuition with Psyche. In order for the spell to work, it needs to be equal in Force to the attribute you are increasing. In this case that's 6, so you need to cast at Force 6, which is more than you can sustain with your Focused Concentration. Focused Concentration will still be useful for Combat Sense and Increased Reflexes.
4) Your Agility and Reaction look wonky. Does the program think that you are wearing all of your armor simultaneously? That would cause a negative modifier to AGI and REA.
5) From an optimization standpoint, you're not getting much out of being an Elf. It gets you an extra point of Agility, which is great, and some extra Charisma that you're not really using. But the cost is 4 points of Edge, including whatever you could get with the 10 karma you spent into raising Edge from 1 to 2 as an Elf. If you love elves and this character is an elf to you and nothing else then by all means keep him that way, but 1 point of Agility for 4 points of Edge is not an optimal trade.