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Smuggler
A. Attributes 24
B. Resources 275000
C. Skills 28/2
D. Meta(human[3])
E. Magic
Qualities 25
-11 Gearhead
-8 Indomiable (Physical)
-30 R3 Skill Group
+10 Weak Immune System
+5 Allergy (mild,gold)
+5 Incompetent (Nautical Mechanics)
+4 Addiction (Mild,Cram)
Attributes 24
Bod 5, Agi 5, Rea 6(
, Str 3, Wil 5, Log 5, Int 5, Cha 3, Edg 1, Ess 2.1
Skills
Group Skills 2 + R3 group
Athetics 2
Gymastics 2, Running 2, Swimming 2
Engineering 3
Aeronatics Mechanics 3, Automotive Mechanics 3, Industrial Mechanics 3, Naitical Mechanics 3
Individual Skills 28
Archery 3 [Spec Crossbows +2]
Gunnery 3
Pilot Aircraft 2
Pilot Ground Craft 6 [Spec Wheeled +2]
Pilot Water Craft 3
Etiquette 2[Spec Street +2]
Navagation 4
Perception 2
Knowledge Skills 20
English N
Russian 2
Smuggler 6
Riggers 6
Smuggling Routes 6
Gear 275000
Weapons
Light Crossbow 300
Ammo
Bolts [20] 100
APDS [80] 960 (Assult Rifle)
APDS [80] 960 (Assult Rifle)
APDS [80] 960 (Assult Rifle)
Armor
Armor Jacket 1000
Misq
Fake Sin R4 10000
Fake Licence R4 800 (Cyberware)
Fake Licence R4 800 (Drugs)
Transys Avalon DR6 5000
Shop (Auto Repair kit) 5000
Kit(Repair) 500
Cram (10 Doses) 100
Cyberware
Smartlink 4000 Ess Loss -0.2
Used Control Rig R2 72750 Ess Loss -2.5
Reaction Enhancer R2 26000 Ess Loss -0.6
Smuggling Compartment 7500 Ess Loss -0.2
Bioware
Skin Pocket 12000 Ess Loss -0.1
Sleep Regulator 12000 Ess Loss -0.1
Mnemonic Enhancer R2 18000 Ess Loss -0.2 (+2 on Knowledge, Language, and Memory)
Vehicals
Harvey-Davidson Scorpion 12000
+Rigger Interface 1000
+Single Sensor R6 600 (Camera)
+Single Sensor R6 600 (Atmoshpere Sensor)
+Standard Weapon Mount 2500
-Colt M23(Interal Smartlinkx2) 1100
Areas Roadmaster 52000
+Rigger Interface 1000
+Single Sensor R6 600 (Camera)
+Single Sensor R6 600 (Atmoshpere)
+Single Sensor R6 600 (Omnimicro)
+Standard Weapon Mount 2500
-Colt M23(Interal Smartlinkx2) 1100
+Standard Weapon Mount 2500
-Colt M23(Interal Smartlinkx2) 1100
Lifestyle
High 3 months 30000
Nuyen Left 3770+5d6*500
Contacts 9
Mechanics 2c/3l
Black Marcket Dealer 2c/2l
Initative 13+1d6
Inherent Limits
Mental 7
Physical 6
Social 5
Con Mod
Physical 10
Stun 11
Overflow 3
Movement
Walking 10
Running 20
SPrint+2m/hit
Attribute only test
Composure 8
Judge Int 8
Lifting/Carrying (45)[15]{30} 6
Memory 10 (+2)