Not sure if this is the right place for this, but...

The current (I hope, I just downloaded it) errata for SR5 says mystic adepts pay 5 karma per power point, so Kyra's character Silver gets Enhanced Accuracy (Automatics) (0.25), Improve Ability (Pistols) (0.5), Improved Potential (Social) (0.5), Mystic Armor 1 (0.5), Voice Control 1 (0.25), for a total of two power points costing ten karma. Ok, but Voice Control costs 0.5 power points per level (page 311, SR5). I would suggest keeping Voice Control and losing Enhanced Accuracy (Automatics). Also, Silver grabs the Assensing skill along the way, but that requires Astral Perception, an Adept power she doesn't have. If she buys that power, it will cost her an additional five karma, since it's one power point (page 309, SR5). In the final steps (SR5, p.99) Kyra has 16 karma left, but subtract the 5 for astral perception, and she has 11. Her two bound spirits cost her a total of eight karma, so she has only 3 left, not enough to raise her Etiquette to 3, so it'll have to remain at two. She has 3 karma, instead of 2, to carry forward into the game.

The gear selection for two of these three example characters (pp. 96-97, SR5) is also messed up. Add up all the stuff on Rob's shopping list, and it comes to 69,975¥, so his carryover should be 2810, not 2785. James' list totals 425,005¥ according to the book, but actually totals 445210 *including* the 4995 carryover. His actual remaining cash after buying everything should be 9785, of which he can carry forward 5000. Kyra's gear sums are correct.