Author Topic: Summaries for the three stories I'm working on. Wanting a bit of feedback.  (Read 506 times)

EiraHaexa

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New Immortal - Summary is in another post by the same name, but the gist of it is this: In the year 2090, a 17 year old elf by the name of Maisie finds out that she is the half-blooded daughter of Lofwyr. All hell breaks loose in Essen.

Trickster's Folly - Taking place nearly 60 years after the first story. Maisie is kidnapped by shadowrunners hired by a Megacorp who want to use her DNA to synthesize an immortality serum for the aging CEO when Leonization is no longer effective. Harlequin has a debt to pay, and is asked by Maisie's street brother, Mod, to help find her. An ancient enemy has returned, and has his own sinister plans for the youngest Immortal.

Tit for Tat - Maisie's teenage son is left paralyzed by a failed assassination attempt that kills his girlfriend. Harlequin, Maisie, and Mod return to the shadows to find out who was behind it, and why magic couldn't heal his wound.
It is better to be crazy and know it, than to be sane and have one's doubts.

"Nothing is wrong if no one can stop you."

Remember, you're only a genius when they need you. The rest of the time you're just an asshole.

Well, drek. Looks like Timmy fell into the Dissonance Well again.

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Not sure what you're looking for - feedback on the concepts?
Pananagutan & End/Line

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"Oh, gee - it's Go-Frag-Yourself-O'Clock."
New Wyrm!! Now with Twice the Bastard!!

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EiraHaexa

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Not sure what you're looking for - feedback on the concepts?

Yes
It is better to be crazy and know it, than to be sane and have one's doubts.

"Nothing is wrong if no one can stop you."

Remember, you're only a genius when they need you. The rest of the time you're just an asshole.

Well, drek. Looks like Timmy fell into the Dissonance Well again.

The Wyrm Ouroboros

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I think that if you enjoy writing them, good for you.  I think they'd be great things to use to polish up your writing technique and narrative style, and to solidify your grasp on the source materials.  I think that if you want anything more (from me, anyhow), you're going to have to request it in private.
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Pananagutan & End/Line

Old As McBean, Twice As Mean
"Oh, gee - it's Go-Frag-Yourself-O'Clock."
New Wyrm!! Now with Twice the Bastard!!

Laés is ... I forget. -PiXeL01
Play the game. Don't try to win it.