What do you guys think of this? 
Jax Tebro
METATYPE: HUMAN
B 2, A 6, R 5/8, S 5, W 3, L 3, I 5, C 3, ESS 6, EDG 3, M 6
Condition Monitor (P/S): 9 / 11
Armor: 14
Limits: Physical 7, Mental 5, Social 5
Physical Initiative: 10/13+4D6
Active Skills: Exotic Melee Weapon: Monofilament Whip 6, Gymnastics (Parkour +2) 6, Negotiation 6, Perception (Visual +2) 6, Pistols (Semi-Automatics +2) 6, Stealth Group 5, Unarmed Combat (Unarmed +2) 6
Knowledge Skills: Martial Arts (Kali +2) 2, Parkour 2, Seattle Street Gangs 2, Sociology 2, Sprawl Life (Street Docs +2) 2
Languages: English N, Japanese 4
Qualities: Adept, Code of Honor: Warrior's Code (6dicepool vs. 4), Faraday Himself, High Pain Tolerance (2), Tough as Nails (Stun) (1)
Adept Powers: Attribute Boost (1): Agility (7dicepool), Attribute Boost (1): Body (7dicepool), Combat Sense (1), Critical Strike: Exotic Melee Weapon, Enhanced Accuracy: Exotic Melee Weapon, Improved Reflexes (3), Nimble Fingers, Rapid Draw
Gear:
Armor Jacket
Backpack
Certified Credstick, Silver
Ear buds (1)
Flashlight
Glasses (1) w/ Image Link
Helmet
Medkit (1)
Metal Restraints
Micro-Tranceiver
Mochs w/ Fake SIN (3), (1 month) Low Lifestyle
Plastic Restraints x10
Renraku Sensei w/ Mapsoft: Campaign City
Survival Kit
Weapons:
Ares Light Fire 70 [Light Pistol, Acc 7, DV 6P, AP –, SA, 16 (c)]
Knife [Blade, Acc 5, DV 6P, AP -1]
Monofilament Whip [Exotic Melee Weapon, Reach 2, Acc 8, DV 13P, AP -8]
Shock Glove [Unarmed, Acc 7, DV 8S(e), AP -5] w/ Internal Battery
Contacts:
Bounty Hunter (Connection 3, Loyalty 2)
News Reporter (Connection 2, Loyalty 2)
Starting ¥: 725 + (3D6 × 60)¥
